by DirtyMartini on 04 Jun 2009 02:29
I'll dissent. Gio, I think the song is really good, but I don't love the video. I think it's okay, but I think the bungee/trampoline bits are problematic.
Keep in mind that I have absolutely no clue what the words to the song are (aside from the vertigo theme), so I have no idea whether or not the images work with the lyrics; but while I love the shots of you guys singing/playing in the pool -- I think those look gorgeous -- I find the trampoline/bungee parts to be repetitive and boring after a while and generally just not attractive. There are a few of the trampoline/bungee parts that I think work, specifically some of the close-ups of Bianca (such as at 0:26, 1:04, 1:17, the flip at 1:56 (not the flip at the beginning)): in those shots, she looks stable and playful and interesting; but most of the trampoline/bungee parts look spastic and silly to me, especially the shots of you and the guitar player. You guys rarely achieve much height, and your and Bianca's movements on that trampoline thing tend to look awkward most of the time rather than compelling or alluring. (Which is understandable since you were attached to a giant rubber band.)
Also, I really want a couple of close-ups of you and the guitar player. I know that Bianca is the face/voice/identity; I get that. She should be the majority of the video without question. But I find that you two guys are too present for the audience not to get the chance to really see your faces. If you two were in the video *less*, I could understand it; but you're both quite apparent, so the absence of even just one or two close-ups of each of you makes me as a viewer wonder what it is that you're hiding.
Them's my thoughts. Take 'em or leave 'em, of course.
Regardless, I'm damn excited to hear that song.
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DirtyMartini on 04 Jun 2009 12:29, edited 1 time in total.
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